please write an appeal letter for the student who got rejected by UCI. please find the mistakes in the original personal statement and write something to justify the issues that were not stated in the PS. additionally, please write something to strengthen the students strengths and turn the weaknesses into strengths. please discuss with me the overall outline/ ideas before you write.
the students original application does not make him standout, doesnt sound something great to be a UC candidate. in order to enter the worlds top school, need to emphasize some great contribution. Need to write something greater. A great contribution in the volunteer.