What Has the Internet Given Us?

1. Improve this the essay I’ve uploaded, and revising this essay from 4 pages to 5 pages.
2. After drafting the first version of their essay, most experienced writers revise their work several times, to sharpen their focus and to show more clearly how each of the main points supports the thesis. Revision means much more than correcting grammar, spelling, punctuation, and mechanics. It involves a whole process of re-vision, or seeing again: rethinking and reshaping the content and structure of a draft to improve it at all levels: word, sentence, paragraph, and essay. To revise an essay, a writer adds, deletes, rearranges, and rewords material.