My professor ask me to rewrite this because I did not write it to my audience which is “Apple” and their co-founder Steve Wozniak.
She basically said that I should write about how can robots help and affect Apple.
So I took notes on what she needs, they are:
Who is your audience ? My audience is Apple and I am writing this to their co-founder Steve Wozniak.
Question that should be answer in my proposal/introduction. “What do I want robots to do with Apple? I want them to help built iphone in America instead of making them in China, so we can create more jobs and not be affected by other things such as the cornavirus for example.
Stop importing things from China (Apple iphone,tablets,monitors,watch and etc..)
What are you going to do to fix the problem?
We can help Apple by improving their sales, faster shipping, making job for Americans to work in the factories where we build our iphones, and more…)
Literature Review (must not be the same as what I wrote, I must write a new one)
How is Robot a good thing to help Apple?
For example: According to ……………… robot is a ………..
Is it possible to make our robot build Apple products in America?
Is it financially safe?
Will others view it as a safe investment?