If you continue to revise for the final portfolio in Week 7, you might revisit the ending one more time–what happens between Evelyn and Mr. Johnston? Does she forgive him? The ending just feels a little abrupt. Also, look over your dialogue and see if you can make it sound more natural and conversational–for example, would Luciana say Instructions given are like an order as opposed to being a request,” or just “I’m giving the orders around here,” or something like that?