Thesis: Your thesis needs to contain the argument you will be making in your paper. You need to say WHY or HOW China is growing so fast.
Analysis: Remember, this is an analysis paper not a describing paper. I don’t just want a list of numbers. You need to EXPLAIN these numbers.
Quotes: You need to do a better job integrating your quotes into your text. Don’t just drop them like a hot potato, set them up before and explain them afterward. Explain how each quote helps prove your point.
Visual: Like your quotes, you need to integrate the visuals into your text and explain it. Not just a caption.
